Haha, I liked the story very much, and I know my fanfiction name is what you can say, is very lame! (I had the obsession with the word Awesome, for a very long time. Why? I have no idea O.O) Eh, it was my very first one-shot that I written, since, ya know I can't post any pictures up yet sadly. (Though, I must say, I feel like I improved a tiny bit.
) Oh that reminds me! I have a new found respect for you, because let me tell you, I have a hate for both Gary's and Ash's hair. And Umbreons too. Its such a freakin pain to draw!! (Though, Gary's hair is the easiest to draw in my opinion)
At frist, when you mentioned adding it on the deviant submit, I was confused, but I found it! I just thought it was only Journals you can write in... Soo, I just might put the one shot into it instead, after I sit down and figure it out. (Though it doesn't seem that hard-ish!)